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<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pic.app.45win.com/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p> 名家谈写作</p><p class=""> ———谭千明（辑）</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" style="position: relative;" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.45win.com/forum/20230613080940front2_0_181061_FkzH6UKs4b_emjrhbqVFUCj2mHwA.png?watermark/3/text/QOaYjuW_g-WmgumVnA==/fontsize/400/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/fill/I2ZmZmZmZg==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/19/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuNDV3aW4uY29tL3dhdGVyX2ltZ18yMDE4MTAxNV85NzAuanBn/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/dx/124/dy/10" alt="" width="535" height="357" 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data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20230613080940front2_0_181061_FkzH6UKs4b_emjrhbqVFUCj2mHwA.png?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/3/text/QOaYjuW_g-WmgumVnA==/fontsize/400/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/fill/I2ZmZmZmZg==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/19/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuNDV3aW4uY29tL3dhdGVyX2ltZ18yMDE4MTAxNV85NzAuanBn/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/dx/124/dy/10" /></p><p> 文章写好后多推敲，琢磨是必要的，所谓千锤百炼，不一定要是“锤”千次，“炼”百次，但像毛主席说的它三次，总是要的吧，我们有时候不要太急，写好连过目都不过，结果都出了差错。</p><p class=""> ———郭沫若</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.45win.com/forum/20230613081110front2_0_181061_Fg9tCeeHBdeWODJKefF9UDQ7ITYF.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOaYjuW_g-WmgumVnA==/fontsize/400/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/fill/I2ZmZmZmZg==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/19/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuNDV3aW4uY29tL3dhdGVyX2ltZ18yMDE4MTAxNV85NzAuanBn/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/dx/124/dy/10" alt="" width="720" height="720" 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data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20230613081434front2_0_181061_FtxLbS6EMinecYlMFyw96IvkGQ4n.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/3/text/QOaYjuW_g-WmgumVnA==/fontsize/400/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/fill/I2ZmZmZmZg==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/19/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuNDV3aW4uY29tL3dhdGVyX2ltZ18yMDE4MTAxNV85NzAuanBn/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/dx/124/dy/10" /></p><p class=""> 我们在我们的劳动过程中学习思考，劳动的结果，我们认识世界的奥妙，于是我们就真正改变生活了。</p><p class=""> ———高尔基</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" style="position: relative;" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.45win.com/forum/20230613080737front2_0_181061_FgbyDs8xjED31r-3ktsqm8jjbBnp.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOaYjuW_g-WmgumVnA==/fontsize/400/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/fill/I2ZmZmZmZg==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/19/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuNDV3aW4uY29tL3dhdGVyX2ltZ18yMDE4MTAxNV85NzAuanBn/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast/dx/124/dy/10" alt="" width="720" height="720" 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